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Monday, March 24, 2014

Writing Starter #25

"Lazarus" by Porcupine Tree

Original Lyrics:  

As the cheerless towns pass my window
I can see a washed out moon through the fog
And then a voice inside my head, breaks the analogue
And says

Follow me down to the valley below You know
Moonlight is bleeding from out of your soul


New Lyrics:

As my cheerless thoughts pass your way
I don't see the washed white moon in the sky
And when a thought inside your head, creates the question
And you

Follow her down into valleys wide.  You see
Moonlight that's bleeding, you're out in your place.  

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